On The Sly is coming along quite well. I'm at the point with it where I'm getting itchy to read it again. But that will wait. First, I need to work some more on the ending. As I said before, I'm extending it by a couple chapters. I want the final battle between Sylvia and …
Adding Chapters
I'm pretty much 85% done with this draft of On The Sly, but I've decided to add a couple more chapters. Extend the climax of the novel a bit. In the chapter I'm writing now, Nick Eccheli, the homicide detective investigating the murder in Sylvia's bar is trying to find her (she's been abducted by …
Halfway
As you know, I've been reworking my mystery, On The Sly. I've rearranged a lot of chapters and deleted some big premises. This brought everything to a simpler story, which will payoff in a big way with more detailed scenes and a grittier overall feel. The past few weeks I've been busy fixing all the …
Spying
So my main character in On the Sly is Sylvia Wilson. Despite being told numerous times to let the detectives do their job, she just can't not investigate on her own. Right now, she's set up a new security system in her bar. It's a long shot, but profilers say criminals often return to the …

