Consistency is Key

Now that I'm a solid 1/3 the way through the editing of Sly as a Fox, I've gone back to make sure everything is consistent. 2 pm is not before 10 am. A blizzard isn't suddenly warm and sunshiny. Okay, never mind that one. Bad example. Especially in the Midwest. A character who was Mary, …

This morning

I have one cat on my lap and the other on the window sill beside my desk. The sun is shining and I suspect they are waiting to go outside. No amount of reasoning will dissuade them. It won't be until I actually show them that it's cold out there that they will leave me …

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